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I'm especially impressed with the very subtle gradient in the shadows. You're getting a sense of atmosphere and depth that otherwise wouldn't be captured in a flat tone. You are definitely picking up some good sensibilities in tone, even if it is applied in a simplified way (cell shading vs full lighting logic).
I have two nitpicks. First, I think you should have drawn the ears with colored lines instead of black (like you did with the hair), perhaps with a darker skin tone color. Because of the stark change in line color, the ear sort of pops out in a way that the eye gets drawn to it. The second one is that the web strands that are holding her up are getting a little bit Eschery--as in the perspective doesn't quite make hold up.
Otherwise I really like this. You have my seal of approval
The gradient was a last minute addition, and it really changes everything despite being rather subtle. As for the colored lines, I only started using those recently, so it'll take a bit of experimenting to get something really satisfying out of it.
Yeah, I just now noticed I forgot to erase a line in the strands holding her...
Doing that and tweaking the shading of those a bit might save them.